Wednesday, October 12, 2011

My High School Debate

Before you read this, you should probably know that it has been exactly two days since my first high school interview. Don't worry; I'm perfectly qualified to be writing an informative article on this topic! I would like to point out that this is my decision, which makes me a primary source.

Anyway, I've visited George School and Lawrenceville. I'm going to compare these two fine academies. I haven't made my decision yet, but I do know the criteria that I will be making my decision from. My sister goes to George School, and I've always pictured myself there. I expect that I will be accepted into George School. I can't be sure if I'm going to get into Lawrenceville yet, being that it is a very difficult high school to get into. I really like both schools; nice campuses, great academic programs, small classes, and decently sized student bodies, among other things. I've been seeing George School my entire life. The first time I've ever been to Lawrenceville was yesterday. I was immediately struck by how supreme Lawrenceville appears to be. It looks like a great place to go to high school; but I'm really not sure if I'd like it there until I visited and actually got a feel for the place.

The main problem with Lawrenceville is that it is extremely inconvenient for me to be a day student there. A 45-minute drive to and from my house wouldn't be easy for my large family. I would have to seriously discipline myself, and my family also wouldn't be able to come to most of my sporting events.

Even though I'm wrapping up my piece, I can't say that I'm done writing it. I plan to come back and edit this when my decision is made. Either way, I know that when I finish this piece, I will have finished it knowing that I'm moving out of my current, lovely school, into a big, chaotic high school; I can't wait for the challenge.

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Flower Garden

I recently read Flower Garden, a story written by Shirley Jackson. I found the story very interesting. Basically, it is about a woman, Mrs. Winning, living in an old Vermont manor house. She lives with her husband, her two children , her mother-in-law and her father-in-law. She had been living in this house for eleven years. Her life was changed when a new family moved into a cottage in her town. The new family was made up of Mrs. MacLane and Davey MacLane. Mrs. MacLane was a widow from New York. Mrs. Winning quickly discovers that she is developing a fond kinship towards Mrs. MacLane. They have a lot in common.

In Flower Garden, there is a lot of prejudice. This prejudice develops because Mrs. MacLane hires Mr. Jones, an African American man, to work in her garden. This story obviously takes place in a time period where people of African descent were not treated very well in American society. People of the town quickly begin to judge Mrs. MacLane for hiring Mr. Jones. It is unclear whether or not Mrs. MacLane is interested in a romantic relationship with Mr. Jones. Does it matter if she does? Apparently, to the townspeople, yes.

Mrs. Winning begins to realize that people are treating Mrs. MacLane differently because of Mr. Jones, and because Mrs. Winning is so close to Mrs. MacLane, people begin to treat Mrs. Winning differently as well. Mrs. Winning does not respond well to her judgmental neighbors.

Mrs. Winning is a dynamic character. Most of the time, the change a dynamic character goes through in a story is a positive change. In Flower Garden, there is a negative change for Mrs. Winning.

In the beginning of the story, Mrs. Winning is a nice lady. She is kind, friendly and doesn't judge others, like her mother-in-law. She has a genuine love towards Mrs. MacLane. She loves what she did with the cottage, she likes Mrs. MacLane's son, and she respects Mrs. MacLane. The author shows this by stating that, "Davey and Howard played daily after the school was out for the summer, and Howard was free all day. Sometimes Howard stayed at Davey's house for lunch, and the planted a vegetable patch together in the MacLane back yard. Mrs. Winnings stopped for Mrs. MacLane on her way to the store in the mornings and Davey and Howard frolicked ahead of them down the street." These two families are obviously very close now.

When Mr. Jones is hired to work in the garden, Mrs. Winning realizes that people are starting to treat Mrs. MacLane differently, and doesn't want to be treated differently as well. She avoids being treated differently by attempting to separate herself from Mrs. MacLane. One day, a mother from the town invites Howard to a birthday party, but doesn't want to invite Davey. She tells Mrs. Winning that she isn't inviting Davey. Mrs. Winning doesn't want to be treated differently than others because of her affiliation with the MacLanes.

To try to differentiate her family and the MacLanes, the following dialogue takes place. "'After all,' Mrs. Winning said carefully, weighing the words, 'she's like a second mother to Billy.'" This was a joke, and it made Mrs. Winning look incredibly rude.

Mrs. Wining eventually resents the MacLanes. At the end of the story, when Mrs. MacLane greets Mrs. Winning from her garden. The author then states, "Mrs. Winning swung around without speaking and started, with great dignity, back up the hill toward the old Winning house." Obviously, Mrs. Winning turned into a bad person during the story.